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Friday, October 27, 2017

Recount Writing (Dancing through the decade) EDITED



LI - To edit some writing in the "Dancing through the decade" recount.

What did I learn? I learned some new things about making a recount you need almost all the detail in the thing your talking.

How did I learn? I had to go back in my folder and edit my recount to fix some mistakes and some writing.


1 comment:

  1. hi peter
    I like how u explain a lot about the dance and explain a lot about the practices]
    keep up the good work.

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